Wednesday, 16 June 2010

VERY basic story.

We were shown a bunch of "Sentance starters" for lack of a better description that we had to create a short story to.

My first attempt was just horrible now i look back at it, but here it is anyway;

Once upon a time a man by the name of George was awarded a medal for producing the best burgers in the whole of the United Kingdom. .

Everyday he would wear his medal like a badge of honour.

Untill one day his house gor burgled and his medal was with the possessions taken and because of that his burgers started to become less special.

Because of that his custom went down..
Because of that his best friend received a medal instead of him.

Untill finally after cleaning his house, he found his medal underneath his sofa.

And since that day he now hangs his medal on a nail in his room.

I originally came up with a stupidly stupid moral that isn't even a moral

"The moral of the story is keep your house clean or you may lose your dream" more of a tag-line for an advert than a moral....Steve then broke the story down and we agreed that the moral is in fact

Don't let awards control you (In similar words) - Basically you shouldn't be effected if you own an award or not, it shouldn't change the person you are.

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